Nurse Monologue after view

Just done my Nurse monologue from Romeo and Juliet, and I actually thought it was significiently better, than the first attempt of this performance. My reason for this is because  I used pauses in the correct terms and breaths when needed.  And also I done this  to prolong the speech. As well as my stammer. I thought through my individual performance how I did not rush it this time and I really took my time with the words and I really tried to think about what the verses and words that I was saying actually meant. As I done the Monologue I really embraced on my character's feelings and what she would be going through at this terrible time in her life. Not only has she lost her daughter but she has to tell her Grand-Daughter Juliet how it happened. And to be quiet honest I think I got this across when I was being assessed by Sonya Curle. Only this time I really used different techniques I.E. Constin Stanislavsky's " Emotional Memory" and I really wanted to embrace in my character and to get the emotion se was feeling across through my performance.